yo, billy joey what's up? nothing much see you take it easy
peggy walked down the street she came to an intersection she pressed the button the walk light came on she crossed the street she kept walking
rick, can i see you a for a minute? sure have a seat you're letting me go, aren't you? yes i was expecting it
carol jones! excuse me? aren't you carol jones? who are you? betty harrison, don't you remember me? no
that was a good sandwich, mom i'm glad you liked it can i have another one? why don't you make it yourself? make it myself! yes, the bread and stuff are right over there
the third race what about it? who do you like? i haven't decided i have i haven't
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5 comments:
Very nice
and I liked that at the end it can't decide if it can decide yet.
but I did not get what is the third race, something to do with sex change, I don't think so.
mariana -
the "third race" is a horse race. the two slackers are getting ready to bet on it.
slacker #1 is trying to get slacker #2 to tell him which horse he is going to bet on.
with this kind of 'minimalism" you just have to take your chances that any reader will understand it
these were inspired by the blog "six sentences"
http://sixsentences.blogspot.com/
love the way i can get lost here among these... struggling to find the way out...
each triggers a novel in my mind... a small door leading to a maze...
love them...
the 2nd piece is may favorite...
*my
:)
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