i was born in the wind and my brains blow all over the city
throw a mouse out the window into the fog
endless waves all crashing all keeping their secret
some cheese always sticks to the wrappers enough to feed -
picking up the paper cups and straws and napkins with delicate, birdlike precision
america not so bad better than manila, man
how did it happen who did what to me i didn't do nothing
can't hear the voices can't hear the silence only hear the sirens
a mother cloud and five fluffy baby clouds
open mouths slobbering mouths say what
automatic teller unblinking sentinel scrape of a duffel bag
the wind stirs the paper cups at midnight
baby sparrow tiny hops ripped garbage bag collapses
i would never never never never never call elvis a bluesman
i'm not putting him down you understand
grab him by the throat throw him down the broken escalator
tell you something what to eat is out on bail
they've got beautiful shops very modern it's just a modern town
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3 comments:
Very nice poetry, and I like the image to. I was thinking about this obsession we have about being modern and having the latest technology. What is the importance of that?
damn... just damn...
I've gotta say that I like the pace of this piece... the two and three word lines and the way that cuts the language up... so precise but so unsatisfactory but so soothing too...
especially like the walk into " five fluffy baby clouds"
perfect line break there...
This is just to say... I like this poem a lot!
Finding a link to some words i was working a while ago to... especially with the duffel bag... check it out:
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marvelous; all I kept thinking was the ebb and flow of haves and have nots... great flow and imagery
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