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 i was born in the wind
 and my brains
 blow all over the city
 
 throw a mouse
 out the window
 into the fog
 
 endless waves
 all crashing
 all keeping their secret
 
 some cheese always sticks
 to the wrappers
 enough to feed -
 
 picking up the paper cups
 and straws and napkins
 with delicate, birdlike precision
 
 america
 not so bad
 better than manila, man
 
 how did it happen
 who did what to me
 i didn't do nothing
 
 can't hear the voices
 can't hear the silence
 only hear the sirens
 
 a mother cloud
 and five fluffy
 baby clouds
 
 open mouths
 slobbering mouths
 say what
 
 automatic teller
 unblinking sentinel
 scrape of a duffel bag
 
 the wind stirs
 the paper cups
 at midnight
 
 baby sparrow
 tiny hops
 ripped garbage bag collapses
 
 i would never never never never
 never
 call elvis a bluesman
 
 i'm not putting him
 down
 you understand
 
 grab him by the throat
 throw him down
 the broken escalator
 
 tell you something
 what to eat
 is out on bail
 
 they've got beautiful shops
 very modern
 it's just a modern town
 
 
 
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3 comments:
Very nice poetry, and I like the image to. I was thinking about this obsession we have about being modern and having the latest technology. What is the importance of that?
damn... just damn...
I've gotta say that I like the pace of this piece... the two and three word lines and the way that cuts the language up... so precise but so unsatisfactory but so soothing too...
especially like the walk into " five fluffy baby clouds"
perfect line break there...
This is just to say... I like this poem a lot!
Finding a link to some words i was working a while ago to... especially with the duffel bag... check it out:
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marvelous; all I kept thinking was the ebb and flow of haves and have nots... great flow and imagery
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