tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2343814765302893451.post1229017483889554852..comments2023-11-17T00:19:20.966-08:00Comments on all humans are the same: the unexplainable man: from an old notebooktimmyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03913219403302733490noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2343814765302893451.post-72373248901838784522009-09-20T13:20:07.917-07:002009-09-20T13:20:07.917-07:00marvelous; all I kept thinking was the ebb and flo...marvelous; all I kept thinking was the ebb and flow of haves and have nots... great flow and imageryHarlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2343814765302893451.post-36780842232608967312009-09-18T22:55:47.665-07:002009-09-18T22:55:47.665-07:00damn... just damn...
I've gotta say that I li...damn... just damn...<br /><br />I've gotta say that I like the pace of this piece... the two and three word lines and the way that cuts the language up... so precise but so unsatisfactory but so soothing too...<br /><br />especially like the walk into " five fluffy baby clouds"<br /><br />perfect line break there...<br /><br />This is just to say... I like this poem a lot!<br /><br />Finding a link to some words i was working a while ago to... especially with the duffel bag... check it out:<br /><br /><a href="http://waxinggrasshopper.blogspot.com/search?q=what+remains" rel="nofollow">LINK</a>Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07415555531504843017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2343814765302893451.post-54960172514468604372009-09-18T19:56:27.968-07:002009-09-18T19:56:27.968-07:00Very nice poetry, and I like the image to. I was t...Very nice poetry, and I like the image to. I was thinking about this obsession we have about being modern and having the latest technology. What is the importance of that?Mariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.com