 dewdrops of morning writhe in desperation in the noonday sun nuclear chemist brushes vanilla cake crumbs from blue suspenders i thought life was real was very quickly informed it was otherwise sad alligator taunted by white flamingo under a pink moon |
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i much relate to this poem in a very strange way... love the way the images (seemingly unrelated) link to each other...
i've read it several times... on different days...
now i think how rude it is not to tell you this work really touches... and it's beautiful...
thank you, hb
rude? be as rude as you like, or as polite. it would be great to hear from you more often... hope you are well
hi timmy...
there is a persian proverb that goes:
in every evil thing there is some goodness...
that's the way i feel about this anonymous spams... they may clutter my mailbox... but i have developed the habit not to read them but the post on which they appear... the post that i once read and loved and commented on...
and always... yes always i am filled with a good feeling... this time i decided to share my feelings with you... to tell you how i feel happy when i reread you... especially because this post is one of your works i really love... and the anonymous spammer has reminded me of this several times...
:)
may he or she find goodness in life wherever s/he goes
may you write more of these fabulous works
may i can read more and more of such things that touch my heart
love and peace
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