Man that's good. I kept looking back at the rules for the form thinking that I'd find something you missed... but no! You'll see. I'll make one of these yet!;)
TimmyExcelent poem, completelly different from the animal one's I used to read and like. This is great to, just different style. You are a good writter man.I specially like the words queenly laughter by light of the moon, that is real poetry, that is real art.Congrats
thanks to bothjon, the main thing in a slurkett is that the form completely dictates the content, you can't even think about communicating or saying anything, you just do whatever fits.mariana, glad you thought i could fit some real poetry into the strait jacket of a slurkett!
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