Wednesday, September 16, 2009

dewdrops





dewdrops of morning
writhe in desperation
in the noonday sun


nuclear chemist
brushes vanilla cake crumbs
from blue suspenders


i thought life was real
was very quickly informed
it was otherwise


sad alligator
taunted by white flamingo
under a pink moon


10 comments:

human being said...

i much relate to this poem in a very strange way... love the way the images (seemingly unrelated) link to each other...

i've read it several times... on different days...

now i think how rude it is not to tell you this work really touches... and it's beautiful...

timmy said...

thank you, hb

rude? be as rude as you like, or as polite. it would be great to hear from you more often... hope you are well

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human being said...

hi timmy...

there is a persian proverb that goes:

in every evil thing there is some goodness...

that's the way i feel about this anonymous spams... they may clutter my mailbox... but i have developed the habit not to read them but the post on which they appear... the post that i once read and loved and commented on...

and always... yes always i am filled with a good feeling... this time i decided to share my feelings with you... to tell you how i feel happy when i reread you... especially because this post is one of your works i really love... and the anonymous spammer has reminded me of this several times...
:)
may he or she find goodness in life wherever s/he goes

may you write more of these fabulous works

may i can read more and more of such things that touch my heart

love and peace

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