for human being
an alligator named augustine kept his apartment clean when the housing inspectors arrived they saw it wasn't a dive but quarters fit for a queen
a butterfly named bo surrendered to mother earth's flow he floated through every clime but was always home on time to watch his favorite show
an insomniac chipmunk named constance said, i've had enough of your nonsense to the frogs in the pond below her tree who never stopped their chatter for tea but they heeded not her remonstrance
a philosophical frog named fred tried to store inside his head the history of every creature their every form and every feature and cared not where his enquiries led
an elephant named ed hated to get out of bed no matter how the sun did shine he said, the days no friend of mine i would rather dream on instead
a grumbling gorilla named gus waited every morning for the bus to take him to his place of employment where he experienced little enjoyment but cowered in his cubicle and cussed
a human named henry brown lived in a little town he had no time for idle talk but exercised in endless walks and dreamt of eternal renown
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6 comments:
wow wow wow!
thanks a lot dear friend, timmy...
i'm really honored to recieve it as a gift...
and what a gift... after a tiring day... which included long walks and idle talks, nothig could refresh a soul like these limericks...
you know our being has got different aspects... as you've shown in this beautiful work... part of us is a butterfly floating in the endless space (this time i can see your very nice artwork)... part of us is a philosophical frog... part of us is ed who loves to be in the bed... part of us is gus who finds little enjoyment in some of the things we do in our everyday life... and...
yes we are that multi-sided human struggling to gain a balance among these creatures within him/her...
so we do not need serious talk all the time... we do not crave for classic works all the time... many times we need something light to amuse us and teach us in a playful way...
in the world i live (my personal values) all kinds of works are cherished.. all kinds of people are dear... once a commenter on my blog called me a hypocrite... she couldn't understand how i could
praise and cummunicate with such different and even opposing people and ideas and works...
i told her because i have each one of them in me... and i really understand what they say and love them...
in my world light passes through both classics and comics
that's why i believe your limericks are masterpieces... i find them both refreshing by being humorous... an deeeeeeep by holding a mirror in front of us to look within...
if i had the money i would publish them as little books for everyone to read...
again thank you for sharing your isdom and art with the world...
this virtual world is really a heaven for the crow who loves to fly and meet souls and minds...
in the real world unfortunately people are very much concerned with the physicalities .... they have forgotten than we are mostly thoughts... mind...
:)
namaste!
and eternal renown
is when naught we own...
:)
ooops!
* and deeeeeeep
* sharing your wisdom
* they have forgotten that
sorry!
thanks again ... glad you liked them ... i had fun writing them
a sweet romp through a thoughtful zoo...thanks
I loved it, so colorful, but my favorite animal is missing the hippo, so let me go for him:
a hippo named plamp
fell into the swamp
he fell into the depths
where he walked with very large steps
and stepped on a plant
that let him go up the swamp
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