Thursday, January 14, 2010


he told me
the saddest

sttory i
ever heard -

went to the
track, lost his

whole welfare
check, on the

way back, he
gets stopped, gets

a ticket
for speeding


Anonymous said...

I inclination not acquiesce in on it. I think warm-hearted post. Especially the title-deed attracted me to study the intact story.

Harlequin said...

I liked the irony... and the harsh and real quality of the " eck/ack" sounds in sequence.... nice effect.

human being said...

it's all a matter of perspective...
anybody's saddest story is totally different from that of others...

like the graphic art here, this poem talks through its scarcity and not showing...