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 ivan woke up
 he was in a strange room
 he wasn't afraid
 
 this was surprising
 especially to himself
 because ivan was afraid of everything
 
 but in this strange room
 he felt no fear
 
 baba yaga entered the room
 ivan wasn't afraid
 
 "is everything all right?" she asked
 "yes," ivan answered casually
 "except that
 
 i would like a canary
 instead of a parrot
 
 i do not care for its inane jabbering
 and would prefer a sweetly warbling canary"
 
 she looked him in the eye
 "that is not possible"
 
 "i think it is very possible"
 ivan stared back  boldly
 
 "no"
 
 ivan blinked
 he felt all his fears
 
 returning
 
 like snakes waking up
 in the sun
 or ice cubes melting
 in a glass of lemonade
 
 the old woman closed the door
 and poor ivan collapsed whimpering
 
 on the floor
 as the parrot squawked happily
 
 and kept up its chatter
 all through the afternoon
 as ivan expired
 
 /
 
 after a while
 the witch returned
 
 and replaced the parrot
 with a canary
 
 
  
 
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5 comments:
this made me cry... bitterly...
how words can be real... when a heart speaks with them...
thanks for the cathartic tears...
thanks, hb
glad to see this site is now "safe"
hope to hear more from you - as i'm sure all your friends do
terse... only word that comes to mind here...
you've really got quite a way with words...
thanks for sharing with us...
Beautifull poem, but also a sad one.
No wonder the parrot was afraid, it has an intruition that was correct regarding the humans intentions about himself, the problem with fear is when is does not correlate with reality, when is a big fantasy that makes your life unhappy, but not when it warns about the perils you may encouter.
Take care, writte more often my friend.
as usual you have managed to convey deep and troubling engagements in this cryptic and ( I have to agree with Jon, here,) terse language.
I think you work with this strategy well ... there is a nobility about it that blends so well with your poetic...
thanks
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