behind every wall there is a tree in every tree there is a bird every bird has a beak every beak taps at a window
behind every window there is a secret sometimes the curtain is drawn and the bird can not see in the window so it returns to the tree
and waits
finally a hand appears and draws back the curtain and a face appears behind every face there is a secret
behind the face another face appears the face of a maid every maid has an announcement besides having a secret
the maid says her piece and the curtain is drawn again and the bird sits in the window and waits
every house behind every wall has guests and every guest has secrets
the guest tired of waiting for the mistress to appear and afraid of inadvertently revealing his secret retires to the lawn
the guest stands under the tree behind the wall he is too well bred to look up at the window but he wonders about the secrets of the mistress (and the maid)
he lights a cigar and the smoke rises to the branch the bird is sitting on and the bird flies away
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4 comments:
Very nice poem tim, I liked this one. It happes half in the jungle half in a civilized house. Every being that is in this poem has a primary task, and either a hidden one or a task used as a rebound one cause the main could not be done. I think that the main character is the bird, although is hard to know why.
I liked this wonderful piece; so well crafted. And I especially liked the little aside about the secrets of the mistress ( and the maid). Sublime.
I'm with Harlequin, beautifully crafted. And quite delightful. Superb.
mariana and harlequin,
thanks as always, i really appreciate your comments
dave,
thank you very much, always great to hear from someone new
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