Wednesday, July 1, 2009

a novel and six sequels






darling
please
excuse
me
please
darling

hey
dude
check
this
pair
out

you
think
so
yeah
we'll
see

oh
no
yes
but
you
said

go
on
get
out
of
here

fade
away
in
to
the
night

see
this
is
how
it's
done

4 comments:

Mariana Soffer said...

I love the shape the words form by having only one word in each line, it makes different the sound also, the rythm I think I meant. Very intresting change.

Harlequin said...

I also like the single strand ... it also has a nice ambiguity of direction, even though I could see how the negotiation went downhill...

TC said...

They say a lone wolf always knows.

timmy said...

TC -

you actually recognized that picture as the lone wolf?
wow, man, you should go on a quiz show or something you'd make a mint.