i woke up at dawn in total despair my baby was gone i woke up at dawn i put my hat on it just wasn't fair i woke up at dawn in total despair
the sun was shining outside in the street my heart was pining the sun was shining i started whining and shuffling my feet the sun was shining outside in the street
a tear from my eye dropped on the sidewalk i started to cry a tear from my eye away would not fly in a state of shock a tear from my eye dropped on the sidewalk
all you sad lovers attend my sad song a rainbow covers all you sad lovers but darkness hovers to sweep you along all you sad lovers attend my sad song
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this is an attempt at the
triolet form.
2 comments:
wow! i like the way that you've worked these into a sequence... and even though the subject matter is kind of sad and like a fall day, it brightened my day...
thanks timmy
agree,agree--- I quite enjoyed this, also the way you have played around internally in the verses
I have been working away at my own and an now even more motivated... thanks, timmy
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